Meaningful problem solver for abstract Tangle Sculpture

The painting I received is exactly what I expected it would be, and is just as shown in the picture. The colors are bright and pretty, and I love the hand-painted look of it. I’ve even had several people ask if I painted it myself. Overall I’m very happy with it, and you can’t beat the price.

Do you like my poetry? Give me some critique?

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GoodbyeI feel that old familiar sting,As I return to you.And I remember everything,When time just flew and flew.I feel that ache inside my chest,And I hold back my tears.A twisted, knotted, tangled nest,Of those forgotten years.As I get closer to that place,And all those memories.I close my eyes and see your face,I barely hear my pleas.I’m sorry, is all I can say,Why did I let you leave?I cannot keep my tears at bay,I cannot help but grieve.You let another replace me,Another take my place.Death conquered you, You didn’t fight,You lost that final race.But now, seeing that cold, hard ground,Where you lay, peacefullyI say goodbye for one last time,And hope you forgive me.A Farewell ♥ Though I am destined to departWith dying tears and bitter heartWill you wait for me, will you not forget? Though I must leave, have no regretI leave you with my memories, My stinging pain and sorrowful pleasI vow I shall return somedayFor in your heart I’ll always stay. The battlefield is slick abstract Tangle Sculpture with blood With dying bodies, dank with mud There they lie, now put to rest Now finished with life’s final test I see your face, I call your name From heaven comes sweet, fresh, new rain And with my dying breath, I pray That you will forgive me, someday.WindI blow, I twist, I swirl and pranceSo gracefully I whirl aroundI’m everywere, I move and danceSo beautiful, without a soundI blow your hair, I cool your faceA fluid motion you can’t stopI’m something that cannot be chased,So fast, I’m like a spinning topI climb the mountains, chase the skyA living, breathing, abstract lifeUnstoppable, I cannot dieNot by an arrow or a knifeAlluring am I, so stunningSo unpredictable I amMyschievous, and so cunningI ebb and flow like nothing canYet sometimes, in the mist of time,I’m caught up in a howling rageStill magical, and still sublimeThe sea my audience, the sky my stage.The man I thought I knewI feel the sand beneath my toes,This overwhelming feeling growsThe moon shines down, I think of youAnd of the man I thought I knewWhy you left, I cannot sayIf I had asked, would you have stayed?If I had said I loved you soWould you have stayed or would you go?As I look at the moon tonightIts eerie glow, its ghostly lightI just can’t help but think of you,And of the man I thought I knew.In my dream ♥ In my dream, I see you thereThe wind flies and circles ’round my hair It seems so real, It seems so trueIt seems as if there’s only you.In my dream, we laugh, we danceOur eyes meet, I’m in a tranceYou tell me I’m the only oneWho makes you smile like the sun.In my dream, you take my handas our toes sink into the sand,The sky is blue, the water gleams,and everything is as it seems.I open my eyes, my tears grow strongerwhy can’t it last one moment longer?And everyday as I awakeI see your face, and my heart breaks.I’m a 12 year old girl, and I was just wondering what you think. Which is your favourite? I already asked this, but I haven’t gotten any answers.Thanks,:)P.S. the “farewell” poem was for school, and I’m not too crazy about iy…just so you know